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You spoil me so much at times,
I can't believe the things that I have managed
to find in my relationship with you.
Each day I find myself thinking about how much I love you,
and what you mean to me.
There are times when I get asked what I want
from this relationship from others.
I get to thinking about how some girls ask there boyfriends
for the stars and the moon,
Yet I think about when your around,
and I see the stars in your eyes
why would I want more when yours are enough?
Then others ask for moutains to be moved in their names,
what hogwash is that?
When it comes down to it,
at the end of a long tiring day.
All I really ask dear one is,
that you come home safetly to my arms.
After all I still need to tell you that I love you
at the end of the day,
because then I get to hear you say it in return.
I can't believe the things that I have managed
to find in my relationship with you.
Each day I find myself thinking about how much I love you,
and what you mean to me.
There are times when I get asked what I want
from this relationship from others.
I get to thinking about how some girls ask there boyfriends
for the stars and the moon,
Yet I think about when your around,
and I see the stars in your eyes
why would I want more when yours are enough?
Then others ask for moutains to be moved in their names,
what hogwash is that?
When it comes down to it,
at the end of a long tiring day.
All I really ask dear one is,
that you come home safetly to my arms.
After all I still need to tell you that I love you
at the end of the day,
because then I get to hear you say it in return.
This is a poem I wrote for my friend Sheralynne to give to her boyfriend who is currently serving in the US Navy. At the time he's underway and she's been missing him greatly. She asked me to write this up for him, so she could have something special to give him.
(c) to myself and Sheralynne, posted with her permission.
(c) to myself and Sheralynne, posted with her permission.
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A nice poem. Sorry it's been so long.
Couple grammatical errors where you used the wrong homonym.
"there" instead of "their"
"your" instead of "you're"
Not bad otherwise. Makes me think of a character of mine.
Couple grammatical errors where you used the wrong homonym.
"there" instead of "their"
"your" instead of "you're"
Not bad otherwise. Makes me think of a character of mine.